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Author's Note:  Alrighty my various bros and brosettes, if you hadn't guessed it already, this is an AU where the trolls had already played Sgrub but hadn't run into Jack and their planet wasn't destroyed.  That way, a majority of their hives are still intact and no one (or at least most of them) haven't died yet.  I hope you find this setting to your liking as you read, and be sure to READ THE DESCRIPTION~


It was Saturday, 12:10 to be exact.  You were out taking a walk through one of your favorite spots on the trolls' planet:  a large, dense woodland full of the whispering of leaves, the calls of many hidden birds, and the quiet steady crunching of your shoes on the brown gravel path you were following.  The large leafy bushes that flanked your path were filled with the scufflings of tiny creatures darting about looking for food while trying to avoid detection.  A cool breeze lifted your (h/l) (h/c) hair behind you as you kept on, the strange bright light of the alien moons setting the forest aglow and giving your (s/t) skin an odd, colorful hue.

It'd almost been five months now since you'd arrived on Alternia.  You and several of your closest friends had all decided to play a new game called Sburb, and through a series of obstacles and misadventures, you found yourself on a strange planet full of gray human-like aliens with gray skin and golden eyes and horns who referred to themselves as trolls.

Somewhere along the course of your adventure, you'd met a wide variety of these strange beings and quickly struck up friendly relationships with the lot of them.  Don't get yourself wrong, some of them drove you crazy on an all too regular basis, but they each had certain attributes that you found admirable and formed a kind of respect for each of them.

Shortly after arriving on Alternia, your friends and you all built a large home consisting of several different stories that was situated on top of a large hill over looking the very forest you were walking in now.  However, your friends had all decided after about three months of living together that they'd much rather have places of their own and each moved out to build their own homes at different spots on the landscape.

After they'd all left you had seen less and less of them and had felt yourself growing closer to the group of trolls you'd befriended.  You were actually on your way to meet one of them now.  The troll you were going to see was your favorite out of the group; you'd felt yourself growing quite close to this troll in particular after spending most of your time with them after your friends stopped hanging out with you.  But it was more than just another friendship, you were completely and undoubtedly head over heels in love with them.

The path you were following took a few sharp turns before opening up to the world outside the forest and you came to a halt.  The path had led you to their hive and you had to take a few deep breaths to calm the frantic beating of your pounding heart before continuing on to their hive.

You jogged up the steps to the door and hesitantly held up a slightly shaking hand to knock on the door.  A moment of silence passed as you nervously rocked back and forth on your feet biting your lip when suddenly the sound of rapidly approaching footsteps alerted you and you stood still.  The sound of footsteps ceased just on the other side of the door and you heard the clicking of the lock before the door was eased open just a few inches to reveal...
Alrighty. This is my first shipfic EVER. It's about d*mn time that I made one. This is only the introduction, you must follow one of the links provided to continue the story (assuming that you don't know how these work). I'm ALSO going to making some fics involving fantrolls that are going to branch off of this one. Please read those! I'm working my freaking butt off and I'd like someone to humor me and at least glance over them.
I might consider doing requests using this fic where your troll is featured as the troll to be shipped. If you want your troll to be featured, MESSAGE ME IN A NOTE. If you want to make a REQUEST, then also MESSAGE ME IN A NOTE OR COMMENT. I'm not sure how many requests I can fill, but I'll try. I also do genderbent trolls.
Enough chitchat, CHOOSE FOOL, CHOOSE!




The Signless/The Sufferer:…

Male!Aradia:…  <-- NEW
Male!Feferi:…  <-- NEW



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AlinaMau Featured By Owner 1 hour ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now that you're working on this again will you be making stories with your own characters? *w*
I think Tempes Arniew has potential for a smexy story and you already know how I feel about Ecosro X3
Bunny Emoji-80 (Pretty Please) [V4] 
Cuttheshadowdemon Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
if you arent busy
do you think you'll make the Grand Highblood verson ? 
SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've already said that I'll be making a separate arc for the ancestors since I don't like this format for them.
Cuttheshadowdemon Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oooooohhhh. Okay!!! :3
CraftyPrincess14 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Are you willing to do a Male Porrim or Male Latula? You don't have to if you don't want to though. I just love this series though :)
SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm working on the male!fem dancestors next.  I just wanted to wrap up Aradia and Feferi's fics finally.
Motoko-No-Baka Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  New member
I have read a lot of Homestuck One-Shots..... But this one guurl ( or boy i don't even know i'm so terribly dumb and sorry. e_e ) , it's sooo good. ;; 

Your skills are impressive you know ! Usually i don't read stories with Vriska ( Because we can all agree and say that the "B" word is perfect for her. c: ), but, Jegus ! This was impressive ! 8D 

I can't wait to see Male!Feferi, because she's so cute and funny.. I'm sure it's gonna be perfect  ! :fangirloverload: 

If they are mistakes in my sentences, i'm sorry, english is not my native language ! ( But even with some english problems, i totally understand each words of your stories... Where is the logic when you need it, huh ? xD )
SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, wow!  Your English is actually really great, so don't worry about that!  And I'm really glad you really like my fanfics!  (Yes, I am a girl, don't worry ^U^)
Motoko-No-Baka Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  New member
Oh thank you ! And yes your fanfics are awesome ! ◕ ◡ ◕
EmeraldDrake Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Are you going to do the alpha and beta kids as well or do you have a different arc planned for them?
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