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Author's Note:  Alrighty my various bros and brosettes, if you hadn't guessed it already, this is an AU where the trolls had already played Sgrub but hadn't run into Jack and their planet wasn't destroyed.  That way, a majority of their hives are still intact and no one (or at least most of them) haven't died yet.  I hope you find this setting to your liking as you read, and be sure to READ THE DESCRIPTION~

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It was Saturday, 12:10 to be exact.  You were out taking a walk through one of your favorite spots on the trolls' planet:  a large, dense woodland full of the whispering of leaves, the calls of many hidden birds, and the quiet steady crunching of your shoes on the brown gravel path you were following.  The large leafy bushes that flanked your path were filled with the scufflings of tiny creatures darting about looking for food while trying to avoid detection.  A cool breeze lifted your (h/l) (h/c) hair behind you as you kept on, the strange bright light of the alien moons setting the forest aglow and giving your (s/t) skin an odd, colorful hue.

It'd almost been five months now since you'd arrived on Alternia.  You and several of your closest friends had all decided to play a new game called Sburb, and through a series of obstacles and misadventures, you found yourself on a strange planet full of gray human-like aliens with gray skin and golden eyes and horns who referred to themselves as trolls.

Somewhere along the course of your adventure, you'd met a wide variety of these strange beings and quickly struck up friendly relationships with the lot of them.  Don't get yourself wrong, some of them drove you crazy on an all too regular basis, but they each had certain attributes that you found admirable and formed a kind of respect for each of them.

Shortly after arriving on Alternia, your friends and you all built a large home consisting of several different stories that was situated on top of a large hill over looking the very forest you were walking in now.  However, your friends had all decided after about three months of living together that they'd much rather have places of their own and each moved out to build their own homes at different spots on the landscape.

After they'd all left you had seen less and less of them and had felt yourself growing closer to the group of trolls you'd befriended.  You were actually on your way to meet one of them now.  The troll you were going to see was your favorite out of the group; you'd felt yourself growing quite close to this troll in particular after spending most of your time with them after your friends stopped hanging out with you.  But it was more than just another friendship, you were completely and undoubtedly head over heels in love with them.

The path you were following took a few sharp turns before opening up to the world outside the forest and you came to a halt.  The path had led you to their hive and you had to take a few deep breaths to calm the frantic beating of your pounding heart before continuing on to their hive.

You jogged up the steps to the door and hesitantly held up a slightly shaking hand to knock on the door.  A moment of silence passed as you nervously rocked back and forth on your feet biting your lip when suddenly the sound of rapidly approaching footsteps alerted you and you stood still.  The sound of footsteps ceased just on the other side of the door and you heard the clicking of the lock before the door was eased open just a few inches to reveal...
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Alrighty. This is my first shipfic EVER. It's about d*mn time that I made one. This is only the introduction, you must follow one of the links provided to continue the story (assuming that you don't know how these work). I'm ALSO going to making some fics involving fantrolls that are going to branch off of this one. Please read those! I'm working my freaking butt off and I'd like someone to humor me and at least glance over them.
I might consider doing requests using this fic where your troll is featured as the troll to be shipped. If you want your troll to be featured, MESSAGE ME IN A NOTE. If you want to make a REQUEST, then also MESSAGE ME IN A NOTE OR COMMENT. I'm not sure how many requests I can fill, but I'll try. I also do genderbent trolls.
Enough chitchat, CHOOSE FOOL, CHOOSE!

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Karkat: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Tavros: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Sollux: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Equius: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Gamzee: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Eridan: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…

Kankri: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Rufioh: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Mituna: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Horuss: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Kurloz: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Cronus: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…

The Signless/The Sufferer: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…

Male!Aradia: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Nepeta: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Kanaya: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Terezi: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Vriska: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Feferi: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…

Male!Damara: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Meulin: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Porrim: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Latula: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Aranea: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…
Male!Meenah: savannaegoth.deviantart.com/ar…

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:iconlyricstuck1:
LyricStuck1 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Can you try doing the humans as trolls? (You don't have to but you can try. :3)
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm . . .  that's actually a really awesome idea . . . . ya know, I might just do that.  I have one or two more things to submit off of MSPaint, and then I want to get back into finishing off fic stuff . . . I just may do that in the next few days.  U`u'U
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LyricStuck1 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay! :3
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xXReader-InsertsXx Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
Purrfect writing, my friend ;3 Purrhaps you'd consider writing one for the Psiionic as well? :3
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, deary.  But I've already said that I'm going to be writing an exclusive arc just for the ancestors since I don't like this setting for them.
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kissma2 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
Wooo!
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Woop woop~
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NintendoKirby64 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Do you use humans too? Or just trolls?


notlikeiwasaskingforadavespritexreaderficoranything... XD
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LOLZALO Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
Psiionic plz?
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've already said in multiple other comment replies that I will be making a new arc for all of the other ancestors.
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LOLZALO Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
Ooooohhhh, awesome!
Can you plz send a link though? I'll be lost for 4evrz...
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't have it written, yet.  I haven't even started.  I'm taking care of other things first.  It'll likely be quite awhile before even the intro's up.
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LOLZALO Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
Ok, but send me a link when you're done! But don't feel rushed, you GOT dis, and you'll do awsum!
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll try to remember.

Thank you, dear.
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LOLZALO Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
You're welcome! ^w^
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KageXnoXAkuma Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
owo;; could you do one with the grand highblood?
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have another arc that will be strictly for the ancestors since I don't like the Last Night Visit arc for them.
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KageXnoXAkuma Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
alrighty ~ i cant wait
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xXmimic-wolfXx Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Student General Artist
I just wanted to let you know you're an amazing  writer. <3
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, deary!  OoQ
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EvilAngel3 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Kinda wish you'd do the human boys too.
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, well, I'm doing these fics at my own pace, and while I'll probably add the human children in the future, I have other fic arcs I want to work on.  So it'll be awhile yet.
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EvilAngel3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's totally fine, I can wait as long as needed. :)
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Rikciu Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*silent squealing*
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Silently flicks ears in acknowledgement*  :iconpleasedplz:
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:iconrikciu:
Rikciu Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
APH Prussia tackle hug your an amzing writer
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, thank you~  U//u//U
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Rikciu Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
its truely wonderful have you thought about it for a career (i have no idea if i spelled any of that right)
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I-I don't know.  O////O  I have a few story ideas that I have been considering actually writing out and stuff and sending to a publisher . . . but I honestly am not sure how that might go over.  *Sweats nervously*
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Rikciu Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
ahh i see i write some myself and i find it hard to figure out the end of a story >///< 
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's why I always have an outline with info on developed characters and stuff when I'm working on a larger project.  You see, you can plan out someone's entire past, present, future, their family relations, etc. and only reveal a little bit of it in the story and carry it over to a sequel or something; leave some things to shock and surprise your readers.
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AlinaMau Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now that you're working on this again will you be making stories with your own characters? *w*
I think Tempes Arniew has potential for a smexy story and you already know how I feel about Ecosro X3
Bunny Emoji-80 (Pretty Please) [V4] 
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry--I haven't forgotten about the fantroll fanfictions.  I'm just going to focus on sheet commissions for awhile before I get back to writing.
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AlinaMau Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's understandable ^w^ Thanks for not forgetting though X3 ♥
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Cuttheshadowdemon Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
if you arent busy
do you think you'll make the Grand Highblood verson ? 
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've already said that I'll be making a separate arc for the ancestors since I don't like this format for them.
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Cuttheshadowdemon Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oooooohhhh. Okay!!! :3
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CraftyPrincess14 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Are you willing to do a Male Porrim or Male Latula? You don't have to if you don't want to though. I just love this series though :)
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm working on the male!fem dancestors next.  I just wanted to wrap up Aradia and Feferi's fics finally.
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Motoko-No-Baka Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
I have read a lot of Homestuck One-Shots..... But this one guurl ( or boy i don't even know i'm so terribly dumb and sorry. e_e ) , it's sooo good. ;; 

Your skills are impressive you know ! Usually i don't read stories with Vriska ( Because we can all agree and say that the "B" word is perfect for her. c: ), but, Jegus ! This was impressive ! 8D 

I can't wait to see Male!Feferi, because she's so cute and funny.. I'm sure it's gonna be perfect  ! :fangirloverload: 


If they are mistakes in my sentences, i'm sorry, english is not my native language ! ( But even with some english problems, i totally understand each words of your stories... Where is the logic when you need it, huh ? xD )
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, wow!  Your English is actually really great, so don't worry about that!  And I'm really glad you really like my fanfics!  (Yes, I am a girl, don't worry ^U^)
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Motoko-No-Baka Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
Oh thank you ! And yes your fanfics are awesome ! ◕ ◡ ◕
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EmeraldDrake Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you going to do the alpha and beta kids as well or do you have a different arc planned for them?
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is actually a question I can honestly say I haven't been given before.  I haven't planned any kidfics yet, but if I were to make some, I would just make a new arc.
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EmeraldDrake Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay :D
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SparrowOfTheDawn Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is one of the first Homestuck series I ever read, and I love it.  You're a great writer, and these are really enjoyable.  Thank you so much, and great job!
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow!  Thank you very much dear!  I'm quite proud of this arc, and I'm glad that so many people enjoy it, too!  I really need to get a move on and finish the others for this arc and then start the next one . . .
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SparrowOfTheDawn Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Trust me, I'll be looking forward to seeing more.  :)
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XyndiaRose Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Okay I know you probably have a lot of requests on hand but I was wondering if you could make a Grand Highblood one, of course you don't have to though.
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SavannaEGoth Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've told everyone that I'm going to be making a different arc for the ancestors since I don't like this format for them.
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